The sound of the clock was going faster and faster, but the only
thing that Rose could do was to cry and pray as she watched her husband an inch
away to heaven. The line become straight which marks the death of his husband,
Colonel Powell. A crowd of people wearing a black shirt was seen on the
streets. The uneasiness is seen in every face that was on the funeral parade,
especially Rose who couldn't avoid crying. The white roses came but Colonel was
taken away with the white balloons. Months passed and Rose was standing strong.
She wasn't shy that she was a widowed but instead, she proud that she could be
a great Mom and not only that, but also a great Dad.
The time have come that Rose will face the
most dreaded day of her life, Colonel's birthday. She doesn't want to remember
the pain she felt when her husband died and occasions like this would mostly
remind her of him. A knock on the door was heard and surprisingly it was
Colonel's older sister, Eve. Rose quickly offered her a cup of tea and a
biscuit but Eve said that she is not here to celebrate Colonel's birthday
'cause she knows how much it would hurt her. Eve continued and said that there
is a new's about Colonel's long, lost, twin brother. Eve explained that
Colonel's brother, John, suffered not to go back home even if he knows where
his family lives because he lost his arms in a car accident. He was shy to go
back for he thinks that he would be useless. Rose asked Eve why is she telling
all of these things to her. Eve said that everyone needs help some times, even
the most strongest person in the world. Eve added that she will always be there
for her because she knows how much Colonel loves her. John wanted to meet Rose
for she have known Colonel better than everyone and since Colonel is already
dead, John wouldn't be able to know Colonel anymore. The only way is to ask
someone who knows him best which is Rose. They set a date on sunday in a park.
As Rose walks to the park she caught a
sight of john who didn't have any arms. Her heart was beating fast as if she
has seen a dead person brought back to life. She suddenly stop as her body
shakes, thinking if she should talk to John or not. Rose turned around but she
stopped again. There was a lot of hesitations going on her mind but she went
back and walked toward to John. He felt very happy that Rose came. The talked
for a long time about Colonel. They see couple's holding each other's hand and
this reminds Rose of how sweet they were when Colonel was still alive. John
noticed that Rose was looking at a couple and he told Rose that she is till
lucky for she didn't lost everything and she just lost a husband. He also
mentioned that there are so many young men that will still court her because
she is complete, she is not a handicapped person while him, it would be very
rare for a woman to fall in love with him. Rose stayed quiet and tears fell
down from her shiny, blue, eyes. She stood up and tried to walk away but the
rain suddenly fall and John tried to push her by using his head. They sat on a
bench where the rain couldn't reach them. Rose didn't have any choice but to
stay there and wait for the rain to stop. They talked again but this time it
was about their lives. They were trying to know each other and after that
day, John is always visiting Rose and she seemed to be happy. She forgot all of
the pain that she have been through and it was replaced by new happy memories
from John. Years passed and they become really close to each other. While they
were talking about Rose kids, John suddenly ask her to marry him. Rose smiled
and answered 'Yes' without any hesitations.
The wedding day came and they were like
the happiest person in the world. Eve was also there in the ceremony and Rose
gave thanks to her because without her she wouldn't meet Colonel and especially
John. The three of them traveled around the world and just enjoying the
rest of their lives. They were all together even in the last breathe of their lives.

Summarize the story because its too long but its good to read:))
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ReplyDeletetoo long but enjoyed reading it..
ReplyDeletei understood the story!
I was really expecting that you would understand it. Hehe
DeleteWow it's to long, the idea should be expressed in short only.About the illustration it is beautiful.
ReplyDeleteIt's too long..hahaha
ReplyDelete..but i love it!
The story is too long but all in all it's good :)
ReplyDeletethe story is very long but reading it is very worth it.
ReplyDeleteit's long because it's very detailed. the story is nice, the idea was great :D try to remove unnecessary scenes
ReplyDeletethe story is long but worth it:))
ReplyDeleteoohhh.. Very long story . but its specific
ReplyDeleteLong Story but it's good. Nice job Teriz! XD
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ReplyDeleteVery long. Haha. Btw, it's nice :)
ReplyDeleteIt's long but it's soooo gooooood! :D NICE JOB
ReplyDeleteWoaaaaaah! Too long... But it's Good ^^
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